Originally written in Balochi by: Ghani Parwaz

Translated into English by: Uzair Mehr

 

After reaching the age of adulthood, she was feeling her life immensely vapid. It seemed as if along with her childhood, her heydays also passed. Nothing was left for her now except some inextricable thoughts. But the bafflement was, she herself didn’t know what kind of thoughts they were and what their meaning was.


She was also feeling the same at that moment when she was going to fetch water from the tank of the hospital accompanying with her friends. They were three friends. Her both friends were laughing and jesting but she was preoccupied. She became conscious when all of a sudden, the pluvial wind started blowing. They expediated their steps to fetch water and return home before raining, however, the clouds had promptly enfolded the sky, and pouring started like the flux of waterskin. Now neither there was time for consideration nor it was of any use. Therefore, they looked hither and thither and hurriedly entered to a courtyard of a nearby building for shelter. It was a firm building whose yard doors were open. Entering inside there ahead was its veranda. They went to stand under it. After staying for a long time, the rain and wind still didn’t stop, so they became very uneasy and kept watching here and there for searching a better place of shelter. Meanwhile, they heard a voice.


“Come inside the room”. It was a virile voice.

“What?” Among the friends one unintentionally said and three of the friends paid their heed to the voice.

“I said come inside the room. You will be distracted by the rain and wind”. The owner of the voice appeared from a corner and guided them entering into the room. They entered into the room one after another. An Irani carpet was spread inside the room, and some cushions were propped up the wall. Three of them put their water pots inside the room by the door and sat shoring the cushions next to one another.

“Don’t worry. Sit comfortably”. He said courteously.

“We aren’t any worried,” said the eldest friend firmly.

“Would you like to drink water?” he inquired.

“No,” the eldest friend replied.

She looked at him thoroughly. He was a handsome young man with a moderate figure clad in the white dress and his smooth hair was combed backside. Her friends didn’t heed much but she was absorbed in him. She thought his feature, height and body, clothing, gait, talks, sympathy everything was peerless. She felt such an attraction in him that pervaded into her eyes to her heart in a flash and sprang up a storm in her heart.

 

“Ah! My heart!” she felt colossally inquietude but didn’t express anything verbally.

 

“I wish this young man were my life’s….,” a desire arose from her heart but her modesty soon stifled it.

A period of my efflorescence had passed but there also might be another one…” a gleam of hope glinted from deep down her heart.  When the rain and wind stopped, they filled their water pots and pitchers and returned their home but she felt as if her life had remained in the room of that very building no matter how much strive but cannot be retrieved. Howsoever she felt much perturbation, but this restlessness also carried such a serenity for which one could sacrifice every wealth.

 

Then whenever she went to fetch water along with her friends, that way was her path and her gaze stared the very building. Sometimes she saw that the young man was standing at the doorway and looking here and there. She knew that the building is of ‘Doctor Colony’ that’s why she guessed that he would be a doctor. She considered that what is her status to think about a doctor. The Baloch antecedents said,

“live a simple life as per your status.”

But one day while returning home, she separated from her friends and lagged behind then this story took a new twist. She was moving toward her town alone, when that very building reached and that young man was standing before her. While seeing him, her eyes adhered to him in such a way that it was hard for her to move them aside. It seemed as if he bewitched her. Suddenly she impinged on a stone and fell face down on the ground. Her plastic jar sliding from her hand fell and turning over went away. She promptly rose and sat down and started looking her hands and feet that might have bruised. The young man swiftly moved near her and apprehensively expressed sympathy with her,

 

“Didn’t you get any major contusion?”

“Contusion?” it seemed as If she wasn’t understanding well.

“Yes, contusion,” the young man said again.

“I don’t know!” she looked at her hands and feet and said bashfully.

“Oh! You are injured” the young man sympathetically expressed his feelings.

 

“Get up, let’s go home, I will salve your injuries.”

“Should I come along home?”

“Yes, come along home, it’s just a matter of an instant.”

“A matter of an instant?”

“Yes, a matter of an instant.”

The girl looked hither and thither, got up helplessly and went indoors with the young man.

“Sit here, I will come soon.”

“OK, alright.” The girl said gratefully and sat into the room.

Then the man came and applied medicines and bandage on her bruises.

“What is your name?”

“Shargul!”

“Very nice name.”

“Come again?”

“Yes, it’s a very nice name.”

“What is your name?”

“Jahanzaib.”

“You are a very affable man.”

“What is my affableness?”

“Sympathy and…. many more.”

“Anyhow sympathy is sympathy but what is many more?” he smiled.

“Many more is many more then what they can be.” She watched him longingly.

“You are a perspicacious girl”. The boy looked heedfully and said merrily.

“From where did you learn this perspicacity?”

“From my school.”

“From your school? are you studying?” the boy discovered.

“I passed matriculation and I am a teacher now.”

“A teacher?”

“Yes, are you a doctor?”

“Obviously.”

After the treatment of teacher’s wounds, the doctor went to the second room and brought a plate of some bananas and served her. She picked up one tardily, peeled its rind, bit off small bites, ate and finished it. When she cast her look higher, so she saw that the doctor was staring at her. She didn’t know with which intention he was looking at her however, she looked at the doctor with yearning, affectionately. Then she figured that the doctor was also looking at her with love, yearningly. Afterwards, it seemed as though the downpour of affection and love began pouring and it kept showering for a long time with a purpose. After the rain stopped, she went to fill the jar again and with the thoughts of affection and love she friskily returned home. That night was not any less than a heaven for her. She yearned for that night many times but never expected it so much because she didn’t consider herself deserving of it. It had been eight or ten days in her luck that she was overwhelmed and every moment her happiness was increasing. She felt that if her happiness increases this way so will she have the power in her to endure the accumulated happiness at last or no? she thought that she always heard the talks of excessive sorrows and intolerance but never heard of any talk of such excessive happiness and intolerance. She tied the knot with her cherished doctor. she was a bride sitting in the canopy. After the nightfall, the bridegroom entered the house. She was lost in the cogitation out of excessive happiness and due to the excessive thirst of contemplation she was greatly quivering. She was unceasingly thinking about the same fear in her heart that will she tolerate much happiness or not?


After a while, all people left the room and went outside. They both were left all alone there. The bridegroom wanted to fulfill the longstanding desires of his heart now. He awoke the bride twice or thrice to “come” but out of modesty she didn’t go near him. The bridegroom himself went to bride and embraced her and gently tried to bring her near himself. All of a sudden, it seemed as if she got a shock because she was lying like a dead body in his embrace. He dementedly checked her heart and pulse. Her soul flew away; she panicked owing to the excessive happiness.   

 

 

Reference:

Monthly Balochi Labzank May 2005

Page No. 19-22

 



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